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All Comments on 'Star Trek Enterprise Bk. 04 - Family Ch. 02'

by Ohzee44

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WhoGivesAShitWhoGivesAShit8 months ago

A good start. Those last few paragraphs and ending conversation are very good. Before then the storyline wasnā€™t clear, the story meandered without a purpose. Now thereā€™s something to look forward-to.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

so heart rending. well told but so heart breaking

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