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Click hereIzel suddenly started giggling, and I couldn't help myself, I started laughing, too.
"I understand completely," Doyya said, her voice serious.
"What's with them?"
"I'm sure I don't know," Doyya said, scowling.
Sowitwee, Mack, and Akama were soon equally incapacitated by gasping hilarity. It was several minutes before we were able to stand upright to exit the temple.
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- COMMENTS
Dreamdog519over 1 year agoExcellent story it just keeps getting better. The second time through for me. I love the detail and somewhat deadpan humor!
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoOver the past years I have read man hundreds of stories in the Literotica site. The ‘Starlight Gleaming’ series is perhaps my favorite. Please continue to the story.
Anonymousover 3 years agoIt seems like publishing the next chapter really has been a shitload of complication.
Good Luck TJSkywind
Anonymousover 3 years agoYou still having problems getting that next chapter up? I’m eagerly awaiting it. This is a really great story.
Anonymousover 3 years agoI’m really enjoying this story and I want to send lots of appreciation for your hard work and creative writing! So looking forward to finding out how it all pans out! I hope Janetta gets to kill Minister Supay!
TJSkywindover 3 years agoAuthorWhy is this not Chapter 21 part 1? It was supposed to be. Where is Chapter 21 Part 2? Check my comments on my profile.
Thank you for your interest. All the best. Slainté
txtraveler1960over 3 years agoUpdated profile says you submitted next chapter days ago yet has not made it to moderation.
Also, should this chapter be renamed to ch. 21 pt 01?
Thx TJ
BigDog167over 3 years agoIf you uploaded on a weekend, many times it will get lost in the shuffle.
priyank2020over 3 years agoWE WANT MORE!!
Hey there, it's a masterpiece you've written. The only story I've found matching up to this is 'the link' . And this series beats it big time.
However, I have some constructive criticism here.
First, the way janetta dictates ranji's sex life and makes a 'timetable' seems to be disturbing. Also, I'd expect more love from the woman I'm chasing for 2-3 years , well let's say I found janetta to be rude. Finally, a request......
Please please please please please bring Melanee Siroptic back now that both commander orchid and second sergeant innati are gone. I really request you to have her as a major character in upcoming chapters. Also the statement -'not on the first date, maybe later' piqued my interest.
And finally, thanks for this amazing series and pls provide regular chapters and updates.
LLAM NUQAN!!
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoI have thoroughly enjoyed reading this book and now I can't wait to read want happens next. Please continue this story to its conclusion.
