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Click here"I-I...I have to be dreaming!" Claudette whimpered.
"Dreaming?" The woman asked, her voice a dangerous purr. "Oh no, Goldilocks. Yer not dreaming."
Claudette gulped. She trembled from her head to her toes. "T...Tarnation...am...am I..." She pointed slowly, shyly down.
"Hell?" the half metal woman, the devil, asked. She cocked her head -- and the lights dimmed, so that gleaming eyes were all Claudette could see of the others. A single beam of light shone down on the woman -- who she realized was wearing a curved, tricorn hat. "Oh no, lassie. You wish you was in Hell..." She started to prowl forward. Her metal finger took hold of Claudette's chin, lifting her head...and the lights dimmed to nothingness.
Then...
Light flared as the woman's eyepatch opened, revealing a glowing red camera lens, which focused on Claudette, lightning both of their faces in a pale ruby red light.
"You...are on Ceres," the woman purred. "And Hell would be quite the improvement."
Claudette swooned -- to the sounds of jeering laughter and sabers rasping against sheathes.
TO BE CONTINUED
This whole thing is ridiculous and pretty fun. Obviously inspired by old radio serials and there’s definitely a bit of that fun there. Hoping to see more before too long and not sure if I can offer much constructive.
Maybe make the blatant advertising jokes a little shorter? That’s about all I got
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