by Br0kenD0ll
I liked it! I like the power dynamic shift very hot. I look forward to more of your work
Great story, this woman was crazy but in a fun way. I just started reading the nonconsent section, not really something I enjoy but I did enjoy this story.
Loved this a lot. But definitely needed a checking over as some grammatical errors
Yes. Some minor nits over spelling and grammar, but that's just cosmetics. A great yarn is a great yarn. This tale makes the improbable seem probable. And really hot. On that basis, I'm giving it a 5 of 5 stars.