by Greenly
I really like this story a lot, such a fun read please keep them coming.
So glad you decided to continue....love the story so far. Hope you'll be able to finish it. Great writing.
I love the way you write, its very refreshing. I'm captured by all the characters you have created in this chapter. They all have substance, but I will share 2 peevs I have with the storyline. The 1st being, No dialog between X and J. The 2nd when there could be dialog you leave it as a cliffhanger!... Thats just cruel and I hope the next chapter is writen and ready for submission. I hate cliff hangers :(...
But great story keep them coming fast and furious!
A nice continuation, so exciting, can't wait for the next chapter!
i'm so glad you updated, i was kinda worried this was going to be another abandoned story, but you're back with another chapter and it's really good! can't wait for your next chapter.
I was just browsing this morning and saw chapter 2. I clicked on the authors' name that I didnt recognize and ended up reading both chapters. Looking forward to new chapters. This seems like a fun story to read and I hope you add chapters frequently.
to see this posted today. This was on my list of Fav's and I was so hoping you were going to add to it. This has only gotten better and it was good to start with. Since you left us w/a great cliffhanger I hope the wait for chapter 3 is a quick one because I'm dying to know what happens next!
I love this story so much and I am so glad you continued it. I thought that you weren't going to post anymore but then I check it today and I saw it. I was so excited!!!!! I started to read to right then. I so hope that you will post more soon!!! I love this couple and the cliffhanger is getting to me!!! Please put up more soon!!!!
..please keep it up. You mentioned on the first chapter you were looking for an editor or a beta reader. Have you found one yet? There are a few things but they aren't serious...your plot and characters are very strong and well defined. Keep up the good work and please post regularly. I am looking forward to reading more.
Loved the first chapter and this one too. Please contine weaving this tale.
Great names. Jordan and Xavier, Very nice and regal sounding for an Alpha pair.
Keep it coming!!!
I'm not usually keen on non-human romance but this one simply steal my heart!
I, like some of the others, was happy to see the update! You've drawn me into these characters and I can't wait to see what happens.
I am hooked and impatiently waiting for more chapter! Keep up the good work!
I am sooo hooked!!! I'm so excited for the next chapter!! =D =D =D
i'm still hooked! i really hope to see another chapter soon. lol. have been wondering how the story will develop :D
Hello! Just wanted to tell you I'm Enjoying your story IMMENSELY!!! And I'm HOPING that chapter 8 is the final chapter because this is one of MANY STORIES I've come across that are VERY GOOD and Enjoyed them only to get to the final chapter and they promise more and its been anywhere between 5 to 11 years ago. Your last addition was in 2015 and its now 2021! I'm not sure what your life is like now But you're a GREAT story teller and maybe Just Maaaaybe you're still writing! But if not then like I said I hope 8 will be the conclusion! If Not than it'll just be Another unfinished AMAZINGLY GREAT STORY that has fallen through the cracks called LIFE HAPPENED!!! You are Very Talented and have a Gift for story telling!!! Thank You for sharing!!! And BELIEVE ME when I say THIS ISN'T LONG AT ALL!!! I've seen and yes even read stories that each chapter is between 2-12 pages and its 32 or even 50 chapters long! So your lil I'd say one in a half to Maybe 2 complete pages is NOT LONG AT ALL!!!