All Comments on 'Stealing My Heart Ch. 04'

thank you .. i get so excited when you update i love this story .. everything else i'm doin gets put on hold .. great stuff ..... more more more

Keep going please I'm so into this story I check it every day

Please keep it up! Love the fact that you have posted the last couple of chapters in quick succession. The story flows and I can't wait for your next post. :-)

It should be 'accept' not 'except' ^^ Other than that and a few missed punctuation marks, this chapter is okay ^0^ I'm glad that your plot has other conflicts aside from the alpha claiming his mate.

I like the characters. I am glad that you avoided some of the stereotypes in werewolf fics. It is seldom that I read a very likeable Alpha bitch (beta) and childhood female friend/best friend. And Mina. I like it that someone is there to keep the alpha in his toes. Jordan is a refreshing one. So far, X is my favorite alpha. However, Delia's characterization could be somewhat cliche ^^ Mostly the antagonists... But since it still the 4th chapter, my judgment might change.

Keep it up!

all the puzzle pieces are all falling into place now, we now know who marco is and how he's involved with terrance and his pack, with a pissed off delia to boot. at least X only has one target to throw all his darts at. can't wait to see what happens next!

I have a feeling the Terrence is going to be sorry Xavier great chapter I can not wait for the next chapter Five stars just aint enough for this story

What a little bitch! She'll get what she deserves for being a backstabber! Great Chapter

jordan , seems to be more than she appears . i think terrence and the bitch, not to mention simon, are in for a rude awakening

...but you really do need to work on editing and proofreading. I also noted the "accept" vs. "except" mistake mentioned by an earlier commenter. You also have a number of run-on sentences that only need a period and a following capital letter for the next sentence.

While I am eagerly awaiting each chapter as others are, you still need to look over each chapter much more carefully rather than getting in a rush to submit. Good luck, and keep 'em coming!

Jordan is an abandoned wolf?

Looking forward to more!

Jordan is a survivor of abandonement for reasons yet to be revealed. She has honed some serious survival skills and like a good poker player is holding. Alpha Terrance and his thugs will...NOT MAY...have their hands full with this resourceful future Madame Alpha. The Cambridge pack only got a small demonstration of her talents already.

She's an iceberg...lol.

I think that Delia is going to get what she deserves but not what she wants!

So pathetic how Terrence doesn't sense the danger in a female like that. Only thinking with one brain, I suppose.

loves company, so, Terrance and Delia along with Simon will all join each other in hell soon, I pray...

Good story, but is getting a little cliched with the jilted lover/rogues/alpha rivalry tbh, whilst I’ll read this through I really hope it gets a bit more original at some point, the pickpocket angle was great, it’s fresh and was well done but the story has become a bit formulaic, I’m hoping the shop owner is a powerful warlock or similar to shake things up a bit. Fingers crossed…. 4⭐️