by BebopJet
Your style of story telling really works for me. Please keep it up.
I love your use of the third person rather than a first hand account. It reads more like a short story or novel. Keep up the great work. Of course, I love the erotica and subject matter. Very stimulating. Keep having fun. Hugs, Jenna
Good build up before raw sex. Descriptive... Very nice Daisensei! Please continue the series beyond the second part!
Why can't more people write more stories like this? I absolutely love this one! I wish we could have more. Must read!
...And very, very, hot! I have to agree with benny, we do need more stories like this, and hope to see more soon. Thanks for sharing this one!
I'd like to read more. Much more! Like, how she takes him home and teaches him to love her dick up his ass.