All Comments on 'Steamboat Willy Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Progressing very nicely

Grey Eagle:

I do love the way you put the details in your stories. Having read a large portion of your stories I also have to say that the wealth of knowledge you've displayed in story after story definitely puts you in the catagory of being a renaissance man. Thank You. Ronnie W.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Bullshit

Once a whore, always a whore. She's smart enough to understand how to run a large corporation but not smart enough to tell her dumbass husband where she is going? What turnip truck did he fall off of? Getting drunk is always the answer to any problem, large or small. Bullshit.

txrosenaynaytxrosenaynayabout 18 years ago
enjoyed....

yet another chapter/story and hope to see something again soon...Thanks for allowing us to read you and taking the time to develop with such detail. Respectfully fan in Texas naynay

JohnnyMaxJohnnyMaxover 11 years ago
More care please

a ships 'birthing arrangements' conjures up all sorts of visions -so thats where little boats come from. You mean BERTHING

That was the first of numerous errors. Rec you get an editor

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Bipolar insecurity ptsd. Touch tag hide and seek. Two alpha lovers getting to know each other, trying to put out too many fires that clumsily occur. Oof, sorry!

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