All Comments on 'Steamboat Willy Ch. 05'

by Grey Eagle 286

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Same thing over and over

God the last two chapters have been so boring.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Same Thing? Think not!

Grey Eagle:

Once again you have the impatient trying to read a damn fine story as if it were a stroke story. Yes there's sex and it's great but the sex aids the story and not the other way around. I do like the way your sense of humor slips in every once in awhile. That also helps to make your writing an interesting read. Thank You. Ronnie W.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Seamen and marines can embellish scuttlebutt like brass buttons. Who needs grog?

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