All Comments on 'Stella The Dance Teacher'

by skip.69

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Good pace

Nicely paced story with a good twist at the end.

I'm looking forward to more.

Jennifer CJennifer Cover 19 years ago
Well Done

What a great story, I loved the way she pretented to go along with him making him think he was the one in control, when really she was in control all along. And then telling him at the end that she knew what he had done, just brilliant, well done!

2lips4u2lips4uover 19 years ago
Well done!

I wonder if maybe she should have kept up the pretense and see what happens the next time? Love the story as usual though. You rock Skip!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Groan! Please! Bury this bullshit "Spanish Fly" garbage myth forever. It is so tediously infantile you have to be a moron to use it as a plot device, let alone believe in its existence!

You might as well just use the "caveman" cartoon approach - caveman "marries/seduces" cavewoman by bonking her over her head with his hunting club, then dragging her into his cave by her hair; whereupon he sets upon her.

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