by TwistedManc
Both stories have been great. I'm wondering though if you shouldn't transition the focus from Brandi to Lana. Or develop a concurrent series starring Lana. Have Lana grow her little lesbian harem. Still awesome no matter what. Maybe Lana can even pull her own mom, the ultimate conquest. 5/5 stars. Ready for the next one.
Loving this series. I was looking for Amy to say "Lana sends her congratulations" . I think she will never actually leave the domineering Lana. (or at least that is what i am hoping) more submissive Brandi. Or will we see a more dominating Amy? thanks for sharing.
Pappasleaze!
Manor is a type of house, the word is MANNER. Also questions is not the answer, Questioned is the word you are looking for
Hear is another word, HEAR is something with your ears. You hear with them. The word is HERE, as in a location.
These are some of the words that occurred in the first few lines of the story. SORRY! Just had to point them out.