by harddrive49
It needed to be half as long. After awhile it gets boring. It's yada yad,sex, more yada yada, sex, rinse and repeat.
One of the best I have ever read. these two are so damn sexy together. I expect the next thing is a move to Brussels and some babies.
Thanks for this story, a little bit ott with the number of sex sessions and possibly a lack of alternative positions but overall I enjoyed it especially for not being too long winded. Multiple chapters get boring. I look forward to your next Story, thankyou
a good --no, GREAT -- ending! They belong together, and belong to each other! I still like to imagine Major Johnson with a manly hairy chest to "tickle" her breasts when they are pressed tightly to his muscular chest! What a great sexy picture!
I like both parts of this story a lot. However the ending of this part seemed a bit rushed. Even with that in mind though, it still is one of the best I've read recently.
I'm glad you continued this story, I really enjoyed it being that I spent 22 years in the AF.
Wonderful story. I spent over twenty years in the US Air Force. Please continue to write. I enjoyed it very much.
Great love story with one minor correction....A majors rank is gold leaf, not silver.