All Comments on 'Step-siblings - and Lovers'

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sp9983sp99838 months ago

It needed to be half as long. After awhile it gets boring. It's yada yad,sex, more yada yada, sex, rinse and repeat.

Frankie1952Frankie19528 months ago

One of the best I have ever read. these two are so damn sexy together. I expect the next thing is a move to Brussels and some babies.

GrandpasmurfGrandpasmurf8 months ago

Thanks for this story, a little bit ott with the number of sex sessions and possibly a lack of alternative positions but overall I enjoyed it especially for not being too long winded. Multiple chapters get boring. I look forward to your next Story, thankyou

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

a good --no, GREAT -- ending! They belong together, and belong to each other! I still like to imagine Major Johnson with a manly hairy chest to "tickle" her breasts when they are pressed tightly to his muscular chest! What a great sexy picture!

H2OwolfH2Owolf8 months ago

I like both parts of this story a lot. However the ending of this part seemed a bit rushed. Even with that in mind though, it still is one of the best I've read recently.

unclemerv77unclemerv778 months ago

I'm glad you continued this story, I really enjoyed it being that I spent 22 years in the AF.

Tommy54Tommy548 months ago

Wonderful story. I spent over twenty years in the US Air Force. Please continue to write. I enjoyed it very much.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Great love story with one minor correction....A majors rank is gold leaf, not silver.

pickup_man_1971pickup_man_1971about 2 months ago

Such a wonderful story.

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