All Comments on 'Step Sister Corruption 011-020'

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AnonymousAnonymous19 days ago

This has the potential to be a great story. Unfortunately it's not. Please get an editor! So many typos and grammar errors. This all subtracts from a good story.

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I'm a fledgling writer mainly writing nsfw stories that pop into my head. I have a lot of my stories on Reddit but right now trying this site in a vain hope to expand my reader base. If you like my work feel free to drop a line and as always leave comments on my stories so I...