All Comments on 'Step Sisters Ch. 02'

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Anonymous8 months ago

Looks like Suzy fell in love with the thing he pees out of. It's a shame he was an asshole to Janie, I believed she liked him...

Anonymous8 months ago

I Really like this story so far. Still hoping he turns Janie around to be his Witness to the blackmail. Wouldn't it be great if he ended up with both Janie and Susan as his little fuck toys going forward, with all of his money..

Anonymous8 months ago

Sure hope you continue this series. We'll written and needs a proper ending...

oldsage_1 7 months ago

Sorry, just a tad dark for my taste. I didn't rate this one. Not the author's fault that I'm not into this genre.

Good luck and Cheers

SAGE

Anonymous6 months ago

He's an arrogant a33#%$%$ much hatred and has narcissistic tendencies

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