All Comments on 'Stepping Out with Steph Ch. 03'

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bigrimmstalesbigrimmstalesalmost 16 years ago
yep, still not enough emotion

and that is why it was twee. Wow, I had the same image of Piper Laurie the God-pushing, bible puncher, turning to a turd punched slut. It was a great idea but done without enough finesse. Take your time, seduce her, create scenarios where she is tempted more and more into debauchery. Now that would have been wonderful story-telling. I wanted her corrupted but teasingly. Not, 'o and suddenly all her clothes fell off!'

bigrimmstalesbigrimmstalesalmost 16 years ago
it got to the action a bit quick...

I expected more seduction of the mother. it was a bit too twee for me how she went from Piper Laurie character (Carrie) to wanton fuck slut.

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