All Comments on 'Stockings Inspire a Hot Session'

by SithLordSexyPants1

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stockingnutstockingnut7 months ago

Very nice. I agree that stockings, pantyhose and thigh highs are like viagra and Cialis. I can’t get enough.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

First sentence, you are Joe and she is Beth. By the time you are having sex, you are Johnny and she is Karen. It’s not a big deal, but in the moment, it throws me, which is probably the opposite of what you are trying to achieve.

NylonianNylonian7 months ago

To echo what Anon said, consistency of names is quite important for immersion. Otherwise the scenes and transitions are pretty good. I would prefer the story to be more fleshed out rather than just jumping straight into erotic action from when Beth was grumpy with him. Remember, a good build-up leads to better story development.

harry_saffronharry_saffron6 months ago

I couldn't buy how easily she took finding him jerking off, but I enyoyed your story a lot and that´s what matters. I gave you a 5. Thanks for putting this together

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