by Mygypsy
I read through nine chapters hoping that this story is going somewhere. But its not. Same old abuse, same old snivelling. None of those men are heros in any sense of the word, and Sky herself is no heroine. No story, no heroine, no hero... WTF should anybody read this anymore?
I don't see a plot. Will she get free? I guess not b/c we have been reading the same kind of abuse (as said b4) over and over again in several chapters. It just get boring...
I really liked the beginning though - really a lot of potential to develop a great story.
This story is still going great but one thing I don't understand. Why has Hawk suddenly got the shits with sharing Skye with Jake? He had no problems before. Is Hawk physco or something?
im glad to see you are back. the stories are great. keep it up. it just keeps getting more interesting.
I don't care what the others say, I love this series and can't wait to see what happens. Just please don't make Hawk and Jake past lovers as it seems there is a little hint of a "past" together. Keep up the good work.
I hate what they are doing to her, and so want her to go home and be safe.
I cant stop reading it though, i need to know she will be ok so that i can then read the other stories about characters in this story