All Comments on 'Stolen Magic Bk. 01 Taken Pt. 01'

A little short but you I'm curious to see where we go from here.

That's a pretty good start, very mysterious. I'm wondering why she doesn't appear to be terrified in this situation. Hopefully we'll find out why in future submissions. keep em coming (and soon).

Different, dark, mysterious. Looking forward to reading the rest of the story.

Questions abound. Who, what, when, where, how? Leaves the reader looking forward to future installments. Good beginning. Well written. It's a 5 so far.

You have me hooked. I love the contrast and how she's not running to stereotype. Would a tough girl truly be of much interest to a tough guy? I look forward to the rest of the story. Thanks.