by Bianca_Sommerland
You have me hooked. I love the contrast and how she's not running to stereotype. Would a tough girl truly be of much interest to a tough guy? I look forward to the rest of the story. Thanks.
Questions abound. Who, what, when, where, how? Leaves the reader looking forward to future installments. Good beginning. Well written. It's a 5 so far.
Different, dark, mysterious. Looking forward to reading the rest of the story.
That's a pretty good start, very mysterious. I'm wondering why she doesn't appear to be terrified in this situation. Hopefully we'll find out why in future submissions. keep em coming (and soon).
A little short but you I'm curious to see where we go from here.