All Comments on 'Stories We Ruined Together Pt. 05'

This slow burn must be catching on if your rating numbers are any indication, though I would be surprised if you thought a great deal about numbers. The fact that this romance does not end well (according to your “prologue” Chapter one) does not detract at all from how well written. We are gaining some insight to Ed, but for me this is Lizzie’s story — she is so real in her insecurities and honest in a self-deprecating way. Yet, she is engaged hesitantly in working through the list. Love the scenes you create: the duck pond — humorous and several lines thought provoking (e.g. when hands feel alright in cold you are in trouble— so, too, life) Wood Ducks like trees; well, at least like to nest in boxes attached to trees. And Ed is right about bread and ducks. And at the sex shop — radio active centipede (perfectly hilarious). I really enjoy “watching” this storyline and characters. As you know a strong storyline without well developed characters is a nonstarter, but you can claim both. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️