All Comments on 'Story of My Life'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
To short

Needed more than just part of a story. Nice so far but need to not end in the middle of a act

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More Please

Enjoyed the story so far. Looking forward to more.

bananashake1997bananashake1997over 5 years ago
Laila is more masculine

Nice plot. I always like simple English and female domination

I wish Laila is more dominating than Kabir who is also domii but submissive to laila.she has more testosterone than him.

Bella221Bella221almost 3 years ago

More to this story please

What happens next?

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