All Comments on 'Story of the Stablehand Pt. 01'

More please. 5 stars! I need more!!

Looking forward to future chapters.

Keep them coming

There are a few editing issues regarding sentence construction, paragraphs, and dialogue but nothing to spoil my enjoyment of the story.

I thought it made a nice change the way you approached the subject matter, unlike many futa stories, and your characterisation of Daphne and Meredith. Little things like the “learned Mandarin” gave an indication of Sarah’s character without having it pushed on the reader.

Many writers don’t realise you have to let the reader think for themselves, use their own imagination to visualise, and not explain everything to them. Many writers as so busy writing everything that’s in their mind they don’t realise perhaps that’s not what the reader wants. It’s a trap I fell into when I began writing. I think you’ve done a good job in that respect and look forward to reading more.

You should write a second one to this. It was great. Felt the struggle of Daphne and would love to see them grow closer. Sex scene was great too.

Loved it! Definitely hope there's more to come!

This was a fantastic story! Well done!

I hope you keep writing and publish the next chapter soon.