All Comments on 'Story Time'

by shylisarah

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Chimney SweepChimney Sweepover 14 years ago
A little rushed.

I liked the premise, but the execution felt rushed. It was a bit light on detail too. It's a fine first effort but next time try to flesh it out a bit. Good Job!

shylisarahshylisarahover 14 years agoAuthor
Hmm..

This is actually a true story. I wrote down the details as fast and as many as I could remember the night after. I have wanted to enhance it and add detail, but it was a night of bliss and i can't believe i remember what i do! I don't think adding false memories into it will make it better... it is what it is..

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Cheers!

That sounds fantastic ... Something I will get around to doing one day :)

plumedserpentplumedserpentover 10 years ago
shaving...

Very hot....I shave with a double edge razor, with heavy lathers that I would normally reserve for my face I love to occasionally shave a woman's **** and legs...giving it all the best of my aftershave treatments/lotions.

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