All Comments on 'Stranger in a bar'

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naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4u10 months ago

It may not have been what she expected but would seem to be exactly what she needed. But now what do they do?

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Good premise.

Sex too rushed.

Needed more preliminaries before he touched her bare pussy.

He didn't cup her CHEST, he cupped her BREAST/S.

You need an editor. Wrong words. Lacking punctuation. Changes in tense between present to past tense.

Three stars.

Aqua317Aqua31710 months ago

Great start. I wanted more about how/why she snuck out after their first ‘date’. I hope this story continues.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

hot story, thank you

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