All Comments on 'Strangers To Love Ch. 04'

by LadyIlsa

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Awww

They are so cute! I hope he isn't running from anything tooooo bad! Maybe just something big enough that when she finds out she will have a fit and we will get some nice dramatic tension, will they get together or won't they get together, you know...no horrible dirty gang of toothless outlaws that come after him and try to rape her or something though...hopefully! I hate when that happens...and it always seems to in historicals! Can't wait for more!

DaniellekittenDaniellekittenabout 16 years ago
Nicely done but you might think

about watching the age of your slang... The hardest thing to do write when writing a historical is to keep the dialect as close as possible to the truth of the age.

Archangel_MArchangel_Mover 5 years ago

A bit abrupt, but per my understanding fairly true to life--for some people, anyway.

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