by LadyIlsa
It hadn't been rushed up until this point! I've enjoyed your story overall though...only this particular chapter seemed a bit hurried.
Great ending. I can agree with the other comment that mentioned it seemed a little rushed. This chapter didn't flow as well, but it was still a great ending to a wonderful story. I can't wait for what you have coming out next. Thanks for writing!
Just reading your wonderful story! Flowed well and well written...lol
Going to see if you have more..