All Comments on 'Stress Relief Ch. 13 - Finale'

You're back! Hooray!

I'm sad it's over but it's still a good ending. Thank you for at least giving it a decent conclusion!

Love this story! <3

Good to have you back! Can’t wait to see what else you write! :D

YAY THEY'RE BACK

Thanks for sharing your writing with us. Where ever you go and whatever you do in life, remember to write.

We missed you! A bittersweet ending indeed, we will miss Ari and Nia… also welcome back! looking forward to what you have in store, good luck x

Very good, hope this isn’t the end of the story. Need more

I loved the whole story, but this last chapter felt rushed, as if it just was a chore to get over with; no real tension, drama or anything in the way of a satisfactory resolution.

As 5 star as the story started out in the first 8-10 chapters, it just ended with a bit of a wet fart tbh.

Overall it was simply wonderful.

But like so many other stories on here the last chapter did not do it justice.

Too rushed, too short, too many loose ends - it felt like you couldn't wait to finish it as fast as possible.

Given the previous chapters as an author you really let yourself down with this contribution.

You could do worse than re-write this chapter 'properly'.

I gave you 5 Stars for this chapter as a measure of the entire story, but to be honest it only deserved 1.5 at best.

Instead of feeling really good about the story, I feel very disappointed and let down.

Not a good way for an author to treat their readers really, is it !

Rapier

Beautiful!!!! I enjoyed it, and look forward of reading more of your stories!!