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AFTERWORD:
Hello! Yes, the story is over, this is me, ToSexorNotToSex talking. Well, I don't have too much to say aside from I'M BACK! Long story short, a lot of stuff happened and I wasn't able to write. However, I've sorted things out and I'm writing again, but, I will mostly be doing new stories. I will finish some of the ones I had going, like this one, but I have new ideas I want to work on. Thank you for reading! I hope you enjoyed this.
- COMMENTS
hotrod824over 1 year agoBeautiful!!!! I enjoyed it, and look forward of reading more of your stories!!
Rapier875over 1 year agoOverall it was simply wonderful.
But like so many other stories on here the last chapter did not do it justice.
Too rushed, too short, too many loose ends - it felt like you couldn't wait to finish it as fast as possible.
Given the previous chapters as an author you really let yourself down with this contribution.
You could do worse than re-write this chapter 'properly'.
I gave you 5 Stars for this chapter as a measure of the entire story, but to be honest it only deserved 1.5 at best.
Instead of feeling really good about the story, I feel very disappointed and let down.
Not a good way for an author to treat their readers really, is it !
Rapier
tentaclesforallover 1 year agoI loved the whole story, but this last chapter felt rushed, as if it just was a chore to get over with; no real tension, drama or anything in the way of a satisfactory resolution.
As 5 star as the story started out in the first 8-10 chapters, it just ended with a bit of a wet fart tbh.
Anonymousover 2 years agoWe missed you! A bittersweet ending indeed, we will miss Ari and Nia… also welcome back! looking forward to what you have in store, good luck x
