All Comments on 'Strip or Take a Walk'

There are soooooooooo many spelling and grammatical errors in this that it's just a total wreck.

What's Mature about this piece of garbage? This belongs in the ABSOLUTE GARBAGE category. So many things wrong. She's a virgin and owns a company? How ugly is she? He didn't hear her getting undressed? How deaf. Please don't inflict any more garbage like this on us readers?

Not worth a star.

DragonRider55

Writing this story. Thanks for sharing.

Your story is a good one. Short and to the point.

All stories, including mine, end up with a few errors. I don't know why some ignorant people seem to feel the need to put down others' writings.

Keep up your work (you keep me up) and pay no attention to those who can only criticize.

How 14 year olds finish college, and run companies.