All Comments on 'Stripper's One Last Job'

What a lucky fellow.

The sex life of a male stripper is a familiar trope, but Vikingwarrior32 has created some clever and enjoyable variations on it here. I like the way that--contrary to my expectations--Brad almost but never quite has sex with the bride-to-be (Jen). Also fun: the scene when both Amy's husband and Jen's husband-to-be suddenly arrive at the house, almost trapping the poor narrator. A nice twist at the end, too.

One technical problem. I think Amy's husband is called both Frank and Jeff, and Jen's fiance is called both Frank and Brad. A very enjoyable read overall, though.

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Correction: In my previous comment I meant to say, I like the way that--contrary to my expectations--THE NARRATOR / MC almost but never quite has sex with the bride-to-be (Jen).

Nice! A bit of editing would be in order but a cute story.

Part 2 would be so hit

Well, if there isn't a 2nd part (yet?), I suppose I'll have to read some of your other stories!