All Comments on 'Stripping Just For You'

Nice story. But it would be better if you gave your characters names instead of just letters e.g. instead of “M” Michelle, Martina, Maxine, Michaela etc. That would help the reader to identify with the characters which is essential in erotica. Also build up your characters with some details. For example “tall blonde M walked confidently onto the stage tossing her blonde hair off her shoulders, then scanned her hungry audience with her grey eyes.” That too helps the reader to identify with the character and to be part of the story.