All Comments on 'Stripping on the Strip'

by Cybotic

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

At the start he had put her keys in her, put the robe in her car and locked the door. At the end, the guy returned the key to her. I think you made this story up!

KitPiscesKitPiscesalmost 4 years ago

Wonderful idea for a story. Well written, I could almost imagine myself in that scenario.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Two-Key Exhibitionist

This is a familiar story. I have done the two-key streak many a time. Planting the second key is a thrill in it-self. Everything is spot on in this story except it is a little on the short side. Looking forward to read more of your stories.

Wark2002Wark2002almost 4 years ago
Good

Nice low-key story. Sexy, well-known done, with a character that was likeable. I wish there had been a scene from the guy's point of view since he seemed to be a likeable character as well. I usually don't join the cry for sequels but a follow-up might be interesting.

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