All Comments on 'Strong Safety Ch. 02'

Intriguing from “Will Stanley” to Liam I wonder if history will repeat itself? Excellent work a few “typos” which do not detract from the story I look forward to the next instalment Well done

Regardless of how attractive or nice Lauren is. Regardless of how attracted to her Liam is ... He's had it shoved in his face that they don't have the same values.

If he's smart he would walk away. Of course he's a teenager and this is in the Romance category so, I'm sure he won't.

Good second chapter I look forward to the conclusion

Great story. I have enjoyed the whole series. Looking forward to another chapter and hopefully not a conclusion. 5stars

Enjoying the story thanks you for taking the time to submit, waiting for the next chapter,

A young man trying to do (the old school) right thing.

I wish him luck.

5*

Liam came up small at the moment you gave him to be BIG.

Not a great ending.

Three pages with very little plot development or new revelations makes this one a harder read. Some small stuff released, like he’s still a virgin, but not much more we couldn’t already discern in the first chapter. Narrative continues to impress. 4.4*

I like your stories regarding the Stanley family. However, your characters don’t have but any depth to them. Liam is football hopeful with conservative values. His one teammate friend is only involved in his football role. The rodeo team friends and enemy are parties outside of their sport. Nothing much else is there, so it is difficult to develop empathy regarding the peripheral characters.

Well done.

I for one like the fact that you didn’t make Liam some bad ass fighter, that is a black belt in 14 martial arts. He’s just a normal guy who is in love with a girl that’s not ready for love, it’s a great story plot, and I’m anxious to see what you do with the rest of it. Thanks KS

Football saint and rodeo fuck girl...

A match made in heck.

Good reading though.

5 stars for finishing the fight the other guy stared. I could do without all the football nerdery, but i guess I'm in a small minority :)

Sadly the story doesn't deserve a 5*rating but very close. Why we can't we give 4.8or9. I agree with inka2222 the football nerdery got on my nerves as well. The rest of the story is very enjoyable, so thank you. Mel B known as Hornydevil47

Still 5 stars from Xluckylee

Dudes a real loser, sits around while girl does what ever she wants and he just does nothing but pine over her. In real life this would happen till she gets tired of fucking around after a bunch of different guys. Their relationship would be horrible with her wearing the pants. No nice guy would ever fully tame a chic like that,sorry.