All Comments on 'Strong Safety Ch. 05'

Excellent story and fantastic continuation. This is really good. 5stars

Unexpected wrinkle! Great story. Looking forward to your next installment!

This is getting intense. I can’t wait to see what grandpa does.

Excellent keep going the past maketh the man

A very dramatic, emotional chapter. I could hardly breathe with the tension. Very well done and thank you. Looking forward to the next chapter.

This was very well done! A difficult situation to cover. 5*

I'm hoping Amy's redemption doesn't prove to be fatal.

This continues to be a very moving tale and has in its entirety explored a range of emotion and situations not usual exposed on this site. Keep up the good work.

I continue to enjoy your story!

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Great story! Keep 'em coming.

Ugh. What a horrible place to end this chapter!

Of course I've thought that about every chapter in this story.

Wow - Powerful chapter! I still don't know how you're going to accelerate the timeline enough to end this in the near future. Not complaining, mind you, I can read this series all day, every day. LOL 5.0*

Alicia went through the same trauma, so how is she? Really, would her friends forget about her in all this? Just sayin.

Hey, love the stories so far. Just wondering if you send anything out when new stories are released?

I know some authors do this Evan on other sites, just inform their reader of the new releases.

Keep up the good work. Thank you.

If you follow me then when you sign in you can see what i have posted. Sorry that's the best i can do at the moment

Really enjoying the story! Exciting and charming. I am confused a bit about the attack. One person says that no penetration and no beating happened. If that's true, then why would a rape kit be needed and why would she feel like he wouldn't want to be with her? That would be like if I got mugged on the way home, hit over the head and relieved of my money, and then expecting my wife to divorce me once I got home. I get she would feel unsafe, but her behavior seems extreme to the extent of the apparent trauma she is experiencing. It's a bit confusing.

It seems some things were skipped over between pts. 4 and 5, what argument mentioned at the top of the 1st page? What about checking on Alicia?

Still 5 stars from Xluckylee

To a prior commenter: they always run a rape kit when there is a sexual assault or strong allegation of one. The sexually assaulted her and Alicia but without penetration, there is no rape charge. Rape kit was run to see if there was penetration. There wasn't. But what she and Alicia went through was still horrific.

Alicia was basically forgotten. Still 5 stars. Lauren's parents just want to sue the school or the NCAA or whatever national rodeo association.