All Comments on 'Strong Safety Ch. 06'

by 2wrongsandaright

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Tx77TumbleweedTx77Tumbleweed10 months ago

Good story and one that leaves the possibility of more parts, perhaps all the way up to a wedding or graduation. You certainly created a window by mentioning their plans for the next school year. 5 stars

BruceWoBruceWo10 months ago

Justice delivered. Yes!

Am sure the next chapter will bring us great joy

Nasty56Nasty5610 months ago

Football coach is a stiff. Not sure Zach is out of the picture…

Turning502019Turning50201910 months ago

Couple of editing things. But continues to be a great story.

des911des91110 months ago

Great story. Thank you

JusteenKJusteenK10 months ago

Great story, I hope you continue with it.

BlueFox007BlueFox00710 months ago

You write well.

Thank you.

5Stars.

keepercoach01keepercoach0110 months ago

Five more * for another excellent chapter. This is a great group of characters. Definitely don't get in a hurry and rush an ending, it happens too often.

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bc10 months ago

Got nuthin’ but praise! 5.0*

Bronco56Bronco5610 months ago

Excellent chapter. 5stars

Davester37Davester3710 months ago

I haven’t commented yet, but I’m really enjoying this story. Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

This is a great story thank you. KS

stewartbstewartb9 months ago

Some people say they know and take everything they want in their life while others live and learn as they move through life. Thank you for narrating an awesome journey.

Tim_the_cajunTim_the_cajun9 months ago

Beautiful story. Keep writing.

Seizeya1Seizeya19 months ago

I'm hooked. Great read. Looking forward to your next installments. You Dun GOOD!!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Proper Punishment for the scumbags!

Russ43ChandlerRuss43Chandler7 months ago

Well done and I thoroughly enjoyed the total story. Thank you so much for sharing this effort to create a memory.

XluckyleeXluckylee3 months ago

And still another 5 stars from Xluckylee for a fantastic story.

AnonymousAnonymous4 days ago

Way over the top revenge on the other boys. Chemical spike and the humiliation sure, but the mutilation? Jeez. He did promise Zach he would never ride again though. Can’t break a promise.

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