by leo_thedirewolf
I enjoy your writing but James is more my speed. I’m following you and I’ll read your words anytime, but I’m a fan of clear consent. Mutual consent. You do you
hi, dnsontn! i'm greatful and I welcome your opinion on my stories. i should've put some warnings to make it clear what the story was gonna be about. either way, even if it's a negative opinion, i'm glad you're saying it. I know i'm not very consistent with themes. I just like to try different things!
The story is good, but you jump to fast from one thing to another, you don't give details about the sex interaction.
In my opinion, your story has potential to became much hotter than it already is.