All Comments on 'Stud Dad Ch. 02'

by 99donsnow

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ShadowRosieShadowRosieabout 4 years ago
Bu-bye, bu-bye, don't come back now, bu-bye

Then all the girls, including Lauren, told these guys bu-bye and left, never to come back again, because they didn't want to be used in the petty competitions between father and son. This totally sucked.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great story

Please keep writing maybe a part 3 soon

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Really, just like in real life right! I guess you want us to also believe that this maybe a true story? What a load of bullshit.

99donsnow99donsnowabout 4 years agoAuthor
It's imagination

I have never said it's real or you have to believe it's real.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

i hope you have him kicking his dads ass in the next chapter

99donsnow99donsnowalmost 4 years agoAuthor
Hey guys and gals!

Which direction do you want this story to proceed? Let me know in comments. Cheers!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Dude, you need an editor. Badly. Do you even read over your stories after you've finished writing them, or do you just hit publish without a second glance? So many obvious errors, including several times where suddenly Matt, not Don, was fucking Lauren. Have a little pride in your writing and respect for your readers.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

The 2 sluts Sally and Abby should not have been with Don and Lauren

poly_cuckoldpoly_cuckoldabout 1 year ago

I really enjoyed it! Not very realistic haha but who cares? I'm not always here for realism. I vote for it ending by they move in with the dad and the dad takes the son on as an apprentice to learn how to build his own harem in time, and they begin to share all three of the sluts.

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