All Comments on 'Student Life Pt. 05'

I'm aware that, for some, this part might be a bit 'slow' and I can understand that. However, in a longer story I want a certain amount of plot and background as well as the more juicy bits - and I'm writing for myself as much as for you! For a one-off I want some of that, but with more emphasis on the action. There is a big difference between my expectations depending on length of story, and for one with multiple parts there is more time to build characters and varied scenarios.

Thank you for making it this far! I hope that you will continue to the next section - which will be more action and less plotting!

This is a great build up for next chapter. The suspense is almost overwhelming and I can’t wait to see where this story will lead Amy’s fate.

With that cliffhanger, I hope part 6 is coming real soon

Got to admit I’m a sucker for this type of blackmail.

Loving all the background and her thinking and overthinking everything.

This is especially well written and believable. Well done