All Comments on 'Student Services Ch. 04'

Length is excellent, as is the writing. It is just to beyond any level of reality. I think it is time to wrap up this service. Amen.

this story only works if you suspend your disbelieve, but it's so well written that I can jump right into it. The rules of the world are clearly stated, and plot and characters follow them without inexplicable detours. I think it needs a bigger conflict, then a resolution or satisfactory end, then it can end.