All Comments on 'Sub Genesis Day 01'

A fine first story -- thank you. Please have five stars from me for a great piece of work.

Or did she realize she was a "thing"? Being used and abused without regards to her being a human being.

Congratulations for getting your first chapter published. You have done well! If there was anything misspelled or grammatically incorrect in it, I honestly cannot find such. And I love the way you perfectly captured the submissive's mindset, especially the part about loving to do the things she'd normally hate, all because it's what he wants her to do. I hope we won't have long to wait until Chapter Two gets posted. FIVE STARS!!

I enjoyed reading this story and also hope chapter 2 is not long before it is posted. There was one thing that caught my attention though and that was she was blindfolded and yet when she went to her knees and was going to have to take him orally she describes what she sees. When did the blindfold come off or was that just a little oversight.