All Comments on 'Sub on a Bus'

Well written, erotic and interesting; a great story. Thank you for sharing.

I hope you continue to write about Rhonda and her journey, both literal and metaphorical. I think her journey of self discovery could be fascinating.

Thank you again.

This didn’t get me off, yet it was very erotic in a kind of warm and comfy way. Hard to explain — the feeling is more sublime than I’ve made it out, almost a state of detachment where the erotic response is emotional more than physical. Anyway, I liked it a lot (five stars).

Wonderful writing, including the early parts about her job and her state of mind. I liked the cute unfamiliar Anglicisms like “brolly”.

I gave it a five, even though I a not into femdom. I liked how this scenario was executed at nice pace, without letting it get out of hand. Characters, particularly Rhonda was believable for me and had sympathetic realistic vulnerabilities.