All Comments on 'Subconscious Desires'

by NaughtySouthernGent

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tallman441tallman441about 2 months ago

Excellent start. Looking forward to chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Good start. You need to continue. 5/5

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooabout 2 months ago
Electra Complex Personified

"...it's always been about you and yes, yes I've wanted it longer than you know" are so beautiful for a father to hear. A very classy story illustrating how father/daughter can be so tender.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Great start, but things got confusing with the mask, and the sex just happened to abruptly.

KingKong2020KingKong2020about 2 months ago

Need to continue this series

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Reader/Writer (sometimes). I like to write stories that have sexual encounters, not porno scenes from beginning to end.