All Comments on 'Submission'

Fantastic story, you got me going there 🥰

Cool idea for a story and well executed!

Very engaging and darkly super sexy tale. Wow.

I liked it all, except for the ending. Spoiled by the happy ever after.

I liked the ending. It was a nice twist and saved it from being one of those stories where one person ends up totally degraded. I was expecting that Carole would end up wounded by the weekend and I was happy that it didn’t end up that way. I’d like to read more about these two lovebirds.

I met an author at a book signing. He suggested we get together for coffee where he mentioned writers get what he called "writers block." That is when they can't come up with their usual creativity inspiration for a short spell. For him to overcome the problem he said he seeks a diversion. I was asked if I would like to be that diversion? I was curious what that diversion would involve? I found out this middle-aged author was seeking a young lady to "entertain his penis." I found our sessions were about an hour or two where he liked to have his cock sucked but also enjoyed having his balls licked and sucked. He would greet me at his residence wearing just a robe. After I had completely undressed inside the front door he would take me upstairs to his study where he would sit and watch me suck and lick on his penis and balls for the rest of the afternoon. "You are such a wonderful slut my dear, " he would laugh, "but I am paying so that makes you a whore." Then he would put the cash in this naked whore's mouth.