All Comments on 'Submission Ch. 02'

I am enjoying your story, please continue. I am looking forward to alana's awakening and the wonderfully nasty things it sounds like her new Master will do to her, and thus through her to us your readers.

Really enjoying your story and hope to see more soon. Thanks for sharing it with us!

Amazing :) More please

I just want more of David and Alanna!

Excellent

Love where this is going! Glad it has so many chapters!

Well written and flawlessly executed even if the odd word in missing bits etc like please instead of the proper pleased, only lil minor omissions. Keep up the awesome writing!