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JoanieGalmost 5 years agoWhy
Anonymous, you are a prick. This isn't an English class with an uptight frigid school teacher. It's a sexy story! No one wants to read your critiques, so button it up and have a little fun with your imagination. I am (and so is my hubby as he licked me through my seamless pantyhose to strong orgasm as I read this story to him!)
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoOK story
Extremely bad writing. POV kept changing, tenses all over the place, 1st person, 2nd person. Lean to write first. 1*
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