by brunette_gem
and there I've gone!!!
Trying to make the Reader one of the participants is a total turn-off because the Reader (or this one at least) knows that they were most certainly NOT involved and therefore all semblance of believability goes straight out of the window!!
No believability?
No point in wasting any more time!!
Good-bye!!
I would also like to read the next part.
Spelling in the story is pretty good, but inside subway cars there are "poles", not "polls" (unless perhaps there is a pollster present).