All Comments on 'Succubus Master Pt. 05'

I don't want to be negative but reading this chapter I didn't feel like anything happen that would matter. If we're getting a transitional chapter I would rather more would have happened or been touched on. Make it a training montage of learning to sex demon. It might be the pace of the first 4 parts but I am still suffering from sex demon-god metamorphosis whiplash that it hasn't even been a week and yet so much seems to have happened and at the same time nothing seems to have transpired. I would have preferred instead of dangling 3 options we'd gotten focused on dominating just one of them. That is to say, I would have rather seen continued enslavement of Liz's friends that weekend to climax at both of them being branded instead of the short scene and then moving on to Liz and eventually Cynthia. Personally there is only so much fucking Rayna that can happen and it seems there are a lot of words used each part that results in yet another fuck Rayna event.

It was a good read; still questions to be answered or new discoveries to be had. Will Max learn more about the sword? Will Ella's collar will change like Rayna over time? Will Cindy, become more than a mouth slut? Until then I look forward to the next chapter. Keep it up...

I greatly enjoy your work, I hope you continue for a long while.

Mc is totally becoming a douchebag. Had hopes for this series but I’m out. Good luck with your work

Disrespecting his Mother???!! Why?? That does not make for a sexy story!!

Mom and sis are next, then Kate, Zari and then Janice.

5/5