All Comments on 'Sucking Her Cock'

First paragraph was excellent - terrific set-up. After that it flew at warp speed without establishing any type of relationship. I also found it confusing. Would love to see a slower and longer rewrite, exploring the characters more. It's hard to have character development when you don't give the characters time to develop. I mean this in the most constructive way because your writing style and command of the language are good and I want to read more from you.

I thought it was super hot I kept waiting for Becca to reveal her cock to Natalie. I find trans sex to be hot.

I liked the story but dont use shemale or tranny they are both really offensive to us trans women shemale implys we are men and tranny is a slur used against us