by exquisite_pet
the imagery and emotion are right there, right on the surface for the reader. an excellent story.
I thought your description of being whipped, paddled then cropped was well done! I could feel the arousal from having you totally at my [fantasize] disposal. If I were your master, I would have carte blanche to whip you till you passed out or, like him, vary the form of pleasure from paddles to whips.
I would have liked to have read a little more about your pain and his [my fantasy] pleasure. Contrast my arousal with your pain. Tell me how excited I would have gotten by whipping your vulva or smacking your nipples with the crop.
It's all about power and control baby! I would like to feel the pleasure your master feels by having you under his thumb...LOL!
This story is absolutely beautiful and heartfelt, capturing a myriad of emotions and connections. The descriptions are very vivid, and emotional responses are illustrated and communicated in sensitive, loving detail.
lady_j
This could be me in the future- it is how i feel about serving my master- but i am not disciplined enough, yet, not to beg him to stop