All Comments on 'Summer Days Ch. 02'

This was really good, and would love to see you expand upon this journey between friends.

Like, this, like, dialogue you're like writing is, like, lame and, like, stuff.

This is amazing. So hot. I'm hard the entire time I'm reading. This story is one of the best I've read on Literotica. You have a gift, Brazen. I plan to read all of your stories.

Anonymous from 2 years ago has a point about you language in the story; it "too much" reflects the modern 2000's language, and should be toned down a bit...if you please.

Otherwise, I am with the other readers here...I love the story and the characters...Ashley is gonna have to "get a grip"(ha!ha!ha!) on her emotions towards Justin...Which I am sure you are going to supply in upcoming chapters!

Christina (step-mom?) is showing some interest, too...how will this work out (for the 3 of them??!!)

Five Star story!!🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟💥💥💥💥💥